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Monday, 15 February 2010

Ponari is phenomenal

The health facility for public is very important because the condition of a country can be seen by looking the society’s condition. The poverty in Indonesia causes some problems and one of them is about health.

Today the society thinks that health is very expensive. They argue based on the expense of medicines. As they know the medicine today is very expensive. It is too high. People who care their health have been helped by government. It gives some facilities such as Askes, Jamkesmas etc.

Ponari comes when the society need the cheap expense of medical treatment. Coming to Ponari, they just pay 5000 Rupiahs and get Ponari’s miraculous water. That expense is cheaper than when they come to doctor or hospital. The phenomenon in helping ordinary people may be caused by many factors such as education, politic, poverty, economic, culture etc.

In fact, there are four victims when they want to see Ponari to ask his miraculous water. We, as good society, must avoid this incident. We don’t want another people die because of this matter. This problem should be solved by government. It should give society free medical treatment or cheap medicine.
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*This example of hortatory exposition text is written by Ahmad Afif Maulana (XI IPS I/ 9017) of MAN Sidoarjo student, academic year 2008-2009

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